Field Study #1
Time: 2:11pm - 3:07pm
Weather:
- Climate conditions: Sunny with a 4mph east wind
- Temp: 77° feels like 82°
- Length of day: 12h 52m
Photos:
I heard the leaves rustle in the wind.
I heard some birds chirping.
I saw a monarch butterfly.
I saw some leaves staring to fall.
I saw many small white butterflies flying by the goldenrods.
I saw many birds flying around.
I saw a lot of honey bees and bumble bees taking the nectar from the goldenrods.
I also noticed that a big tree is dying.
Great start! You're doing a good job of showing and describing and giving relationships between things...by the, many, etc. Where you can, try to estimate numbers even if there are many...
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